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[主樓] 第八屆全國創新英語作文大賽優勝作文/刁文卿

Volunteer work: an unique lesson

  刁文卿

  遼寧省大連市第十二中學高二9班

  With the rapid development of techndogy(technology) and communication in our society, the sense of competitiveness and cooperation filled our mind steadily. At the same time, the owarness(awareness) of helping others in people's mind also became stronger and stronger. This situation led to the start of a new “job”—volunteer。

  We just found from the passage that the increasing number of the vdunteer(volunteer) touched all the people home and abroad. And I argue the point that volunteer work plays an integral part in our daily life especially for the youth in China。

  First and foremest(foremost), nowadays, parents can only have one child and he or she may be given the best care of the other members in the family. As a consequence, the only clild(child) may become selfish and self-centered unconciously(unconsciously)。

  The volunteer work, as a special lessons can help the youngster put the other people's feeling before theirs and ask for their opinion before taking actions. Second volunreer(volunteer) work is not only a training of do others a favour but a process of improving your cooperation ability as well。

  Last but not least, volunteer work is an unique lesson that we cant(cannot) get in our school. Former leader Jiangzemin said: the main goal in education is making students more creative and helping them reach their full potential. And in my poirt(point) view, it is volunteer work which can help them reach their full potential but not our school lessons. This kind of pratical practise can make us know more about what is going on in our society and in the world, for instance, the May 12 earthquake in wenchuan and the wonderful 2008 Beijing Olympic Game and so on。

  All the evidence discussed in the above awalysis the points to my conclusion that volunteer work is an unique lesson for our teenagers as it make us know more. do more and think more. And I believe that the accumulation of volunteer will rising rapily and it will lead our country to a brighter future。

  專家建議:

  寫完作文后,自己通讀一遍,這樣會減少些不必要的拼寫和語法錯誤,建議多學過的詞組造句,這樣表達會更豐富,也可以多看些優秀范文。

  專家點評:

  文章表達清楚,語言較好,但結構有些不清晰,第二點在文章中沒有展開說。時態用的有些混亂??傮w不錯。

  Volunteer Life

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